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Ide · 04-24-2009, 04:40 PM

Looks good Nicole!

If you have time I would look again at the proportion of the column width to the arch width in shots 5 and 7. At 1:18 the relation of the arch and the capital of the column on the left shows the disproportion the most I think. You can also see that the columns are a little out of proportion at 1:02.

It's hard to tell how much resolution I'm losing by watching this on vimeo, but shots 2-4 look a little too washed out and blurred. Especially on shot 2 where you have that cool goddess carving, I want to see it better defined, maybe by reflecting a little light from below?

Good luck with your review!

04-24-2009, 04:40 PM	#10
Ide Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Seattle Posts: 361	Re: Looking for a Positon - 10 Years Experience Looks good Nicole! If you have time I would look again at the proportion of the column width to the arch width in shots 5 and 7. At 1:18 the relation of the arch and the capital of the column on the left shows the disproportion the most I think. You can also see that the columns are a little out of proportion at 1:02. It's hard to tell how much resolution I'm losing by watching this on vimeo, but shots 2-4 look a little too washed out and blurred. Especially on shot 2 where you have that cool goddess carving, I want to see it better defined, maybe by reflecting a little light from below? Good luck with your review!