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That definitely sounds like an ad rather than an encyclopedic entry. And there's not much notable about the entry as far as reference material is concerned. Instead, the wording is suggestive of promotion rather than information.
Remove any reference to biased material ("As opposed to most MUDs, hot copyovers and automatic crash reboots keep Clandestine up and running longer to provide more game time to the players..." )and cheerleading. The entry should not seem like it is promoting the game. The entire Features section is horrible about that.
Basically, if you really think you want your MUD listed there, come up with the dullest, driest, just-the-facts entry you can, without putting any effort into promotion. That might be of some use though honestly, no offense intended, there's nothing significant about the MUD that makes it significant enough for reference beyond a name in a list or maybe a sentence or very-short paragraph (same goes for pretty much any MUD).
Take care,
Jason
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