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Old 10-21-2003, 10:20 AM   #5
Jazuela
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One possible solution to this problem: The detailed fade to black, which you would have complete control over. Here's the scene:

>Meandude tugs down his pants and throws you against the wall.

This is your chance to end it without the details...

>You whimper and cry, tears running down your eyes, as Meandude molests you mercilessly. After he finishes, you slump to the ground, your battered body trembling violently, and crumple into a heap.

The end. YOU have decided that he has finished. YOU have decided that your character didn't like it, and YOU have decided the result of the ordeal. You can do this however you like..depending on if your character would put up a fight, or if you'd faint (if your game's code allows your character to black out, thus depriving Meandude of any satisfaction in knowing that you actually saw anything that he's doing, if he bothers at all by that point).

I've used this type of fade in intimate scenes with my own characters, though none involved rape. But an "enjoyable" fade can always be rewritten to imply an "unenjoyable" fade.

If Meandude tries to do it again, then you just add another ending of your own device. Rinse, repeat, until Meandude gets bored and goes on to bother someone else.

That's the magic of text.
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