I've heard it described as "it's like Armageddon, only with everything that Delerak saw wrong with it fixed" (and if that isn't an accurate description sorry, but it's what I've heard from a (possibly ex) builder.
If I were you Delerak I'd get rid of the frames. They suck and are really just horrible. I'd also get rid of the splash page, it's completely unnecessary and if you can, replace the Dark Sun artwork with your own. It's really a lot more impressive to have original artwork specific to your mud.
Good luck with it.
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